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A-Vision helps you see from a positive perspective!
Motivate to Graduation Special: One of the 58 page journals shown below and 24 months of motivational postcards for $50.
 
5House Favorites:
| "Notes for the Journey," journal by Adrienne Vyfhuis Order online now |
| "Rich Dad, Poor Dad," by Robert Kiyosaki |
| "Live Your Dreams," by Les Brown |
| "Make it Happen," by Kevin Liles with Samantha Marshall |
| "Who Moved My Cheese," by Spencer Johnson, M.D. |
| "Never Eat Alone," by Keith Ferrazzi with Tahl Raz |
| "The Millionaire Next Door," by Drs. T. Stanley and W. Danko |
| "The Pact," by Drs. S. Davis, G. Jenkins, and R. Hunt |
| "Dale Carnegie's Golden Book," by Dale Carnegie |
| "Success Runs in Our Race," by George Fraser |
| "The Riches Man in Babylon," by George S. Clason |
| "You Were Born for Greatness," journal by Adrienne Vyfhuis Order online now |
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Customer Satisfaction Bonus: If you use the journal for over 30 days, and you are not 100% satisfied with the results in your mind-vision-mission connection and effectiveness, please email us and we will send you a copy of the poem "Best YOU."
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To order the journal, and/ or email us about your favorite book:
EFFECTIVE WRITING
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Rule 1.
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Use concrete rather than vague language, and keep it simple.
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Examples
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Vague
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The weather was of an extreme nature in the South.
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Clear & Concise
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Florida had very rainy weather last week.
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Rule 2.
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Use active voice whenever possible. Active voice means the subject is doing the verb.
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Examples
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Active
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Terry hit the ball.
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Passive
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The ball was hit by Terry.
Notice that the responsible party may not even appear when using passive voice.
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Rule 3.
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Avoid overusing there is, there are, it is, it was, etc.
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Example
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There is a case of meningitis that was reported in the newspaper.
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Better
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The newspaper reported a case of meningitis. (Active voice)
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Example
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It is important to signal before making a left turn.
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Better
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You should signal before making a left turn. (Active voice)
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Rule 4.
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If you start a sentence with an action, place the actor immediately after or you will create a dangling modifier.
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Incorrect
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While walking across the street, the snowball hit her.
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Correct
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She was hit by a snowball while walking across the street.
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